Nowadays there are two views related to teaching children how to be a good member of society, the first view is discussing if it should be by parents and the second view is discussing if it should be by the school. we shall discuss further the two views as below.
First, we will start with people opinion that it should be by the parents as parents have a huge impact on their children and they should give them a good example how to be a good member in the society, as the first impression kids notice is how they see their parents dealing with other people in society. especially the poor guys or the lower level like labours, garbage man,etc.. If they saw you how you are dealing with others, so they will follow the same.
The second view is related to school which they have an equal impact of parents on children, as they are spending most of their time in school and contacted with their teachers and friend where they gain a lot of habits from them. In parallel school teachers have to notice children activities and behaviours and report the same to their parents to take the corrective actions accordingly.
From my experience and my point of view, I believe that both parties are responsible for learning the children how to be a good member of society.
- Nowadays there are two views related to teaching children how to be a good member of society, the first view is discussing if it should be by parents and the second view is discussing if it should be by the school. we shall discuss further the two views a 56
- the given charts show the school spendings during the last twenty years from 1981 to 2001and it's shown different categories including Insurance, teachers salaries, furniture and equipment, resources and last one is other workers salaries 56
- The given charts show the school spending’s during the last twenty years from 1981 to 2001and its shown different categories including Insurance, teachers’ salaries, furniture and equipment, resources and last one is other workers’ salaries. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...s dealing with other people in society. especially the poor guys or the lower level like l...
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Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...he lower level like labours, garbage man,etc.. If they saw you how you are dealing w...
^^^^
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ower level like labours, garbage man,etc.. If they saw you how you are dealing wit...
^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ren how to be a good member of society.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34348980037 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8367276961 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26193380582 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112990244113 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993145628743 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181210907226 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445463401916 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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