The line graph and tabular chart reveal the data about water used by globally and consuming water in two distinctive countries.
After careful analysis, in1900, Water used by 500 km3 in agriculture sector. it increased gradually 1000 km in 1950. After that it sharply increased and cross the peak point by 3000 km in the year 2000. However, water used by Industrial sector and domestic sector in 1900 and it incline slowly to 200 km in 1950. Then in an industrial sector it increased rocketly and reached to 1200 km. whereas, in domestic sector it increased by just 300 km in the year 2000.
Furthermore, in 2000 Brazil has highest population which was 176 million and area was 26,500 km square.However, water used by 359 m per person. Moreover, Congo has just 5.2 million population and there water consumed by just 8m per person in the year 2000.
Overall, the highest Water used by globally in agricultural sector and lowest consumption of water in domestic sector. However, consumption of water in Brazil was highest as compared to Congo country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d by 500 km3 in agriculture sector. it increased gradually 1000 km in 1950. Af...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inclines'?
Suggestion: inclines
...ctor and domestic sector in 1900 and it incline slowly to 200 km in 1950. Then in an in...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...year 2000. Furthermore, in 2000 Brazil has highest population which was 176 million and ar...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...6 million and area was 26,500 km square.However, water used by 359 m per person. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95530726257 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79754983374 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502793296089 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1982356871 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6363636364 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214309653768 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952082303666 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100605547665 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178893803574 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109122243284 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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