The bar graph provides information about the four different waste disposal methods which are using in four cities Toronto Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman.
overall, it is clearly evident that Toronto and Amman prefer to landfill for waste disposal whilst Madrid and Kuala Lumpur mostly likes to use incineration. On the other side composting is least preferred by all four countries.
At first sight, it is vivid that landfill makes up two third of total waste disposal in Toronto and there is no big difference between the other three methods there average is around 8%. But in the Kuala Lumpur incineration is more suitable for waste disposal with 55%.
Analysing the remaining data. which assert that in Amman, landfill and incineration both ways have almost equal importance and their use is around 50% whilst composting uses is almost one per cent. In Madrid. 40% waste disposal by incineration followed by landfill, recycling and composting with 29% ,23% and 10% respectively
- The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other In which way does it change the types of relationship between people Is this a positive or negative development 93
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people say that working couple must equally share the household responsibilities in all cultures across the world. Howevere, others disagree with this statement. 56
- The bar chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur, and Amman. 84
- Development in technology has brought various environmental problems Some believe that people need to live to solve environmental problems Others however believe technology is the way to solve these problems Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.175 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59081912723 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6671839415 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395777747119 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166253070432 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152482866677 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275462888713 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157926058315 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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