With dawn to civilization, people giving more value to education and they provide the best school and the teachers to educate their children. It is a controversial question whether the teaching profession is respected these days or not. Not surprisingly, a number of controversies are overwhelmed this topic. In my opinion, teachers are the precious gift to our society and more valued in the modern world.
First and foremost, the significance of education has increased with the advent of modern technology. Its effects have been seen in every sphere of our life, most commonly it increases the standard of education as well as the importance of teachers. For example, education has emerged as a new level, our intellectual professors are reached at every corner of the world. Last days, I was reading a book written by one of the most influential intellectual professors of the western world, named Peterson, the book was about the rules of life. After reading the book, I was so impressed with his ability to describe the lessons of our life and I feel his remarkable teaching capacity and learned how his online students encourage him to write a book. However, people think that the value of teachers has decreased these days, but I consider in the other way that they have changed their methods to teach us. Now, we can interact them and follow them on the social media and praise and discuss a variety of topics with them. In fact, they are more open to discuss and debate the topics than previous days. Therefore, they are more respected these days.
Secondly, universities provide ample courses online, which are taught by the most experienced educators. Even before sending a kid into play school, parents first inquire the knowledge of their teachers and selecting the university entirely depends upon the remarkable reputations of the professors. No wonder, there are several universities around us, which provide the same course, but students like to get admission, where they believe in professors. In this way, might be techniques of teaching are changed, but the appreciation has increased from the past days.
In conclusion, I believe that the importance of teachers has increased and they are known to the whole world and with the availability of the online, you can interact them easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05744125326 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78372086268 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543080939948 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7616131075 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.611111111 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152647617298 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483239841029 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452821863504 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971735746224 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268004401597 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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