Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Currently, a great quantity of prosperous spotsmen makes big money on their career in comparison with other professionals in their area of activity. This issue is argued by those folks who suppose that such rewardings are deserved and those who say that it is dishonest. From my point of view, high wages should be paid to sport professionals for their neccessity for society, not for their physiques.
In these days, contemporary sport prize-takers are objects of intense interest from media not only for their professionalism and sport skills, but also for their luxurious life and high salaries. Inevitably, successful career is a result of continious physical trainings and constant work on themselves which athletes are affected. Earning a great deal of money, sport geniuses spend them on keeping fit and maintaining their organisms after serious injuries and hurts. Furthermore, owing to early retirement sport professionals are prompted to support their status in order to be required permanently. Admittedly, sport entirely impacts on country's position at the world stage and awardees implement the role of tools for amending these positions.
Even though sport and sportsmen are such integral parts for stable country , it does not denote that other fields should be ignored. In other words, professionals of medicine or research area must be estimated for their contribution to society adequatly. Saving lives and working in challenging conditions are more complicate and hazardous, namely, dwellers doing these activities are more significant for community than athletes.
All in all, shamateurs' salaries should be obtained proportionally to importance of sport industry not only for country in general, but also for inhabitants individually. Altogether, I admit that high incomes which are paid to athletes are exaggerated enormously and gratuitously.
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some people think that the fictional violence portrayed on TV is harmless entertainment Others disagree and think that it encourages bad behaviour Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, in general, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59507042254 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06819184042 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3045186974 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146841411689 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545767247425 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310468838247 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895533392409 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358013480576 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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