The reading and lecture are both about the comparing the women's painting with Rembrandt's original painting.Where as the author of the reading states that the painting is not a original painting of Rembrandt , the lecture suggest that the painting is of Rembrandt.The lecture casts doubts on the main point made in the reading by providing three reasons.
First of all,according to the reading,painting has a in consistence with the dressing style while the Rembrandt was always aware about the consistency of the dress.However,the lecture disputes this point.
She says that the analysis of the color is same as of the Rembrandt. Furthermore,she mention that there was added a color in the painting to increase the value of the painting as it was 100 years old.
Secondly,the reading states that there is the difference in the light and the shadow in the painting.Nevertheless,the lecturer refutes this argument.She argues that there was the reflection of the light in the face of the painting.In addition,she points out that the face is impartial to the original painting.
Finally,the reading claims that there was a error in the painting with the color.On the other hand,the lecturer believe that the painting was enlarged by the glue to make the painting large.She thinks that due to the glue ,it make the color difference.Moreover,she feels that the wood used in the painting is same as the original painting.
In conclusion,although the reading and the lecture are both about the woman's painting,the three main point made in the reading are effectively challenged by the lecturer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24609375 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50861880385 2.5805825403 136% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43359375 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.50853623 49.2860985944 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.857142857 110.228320801 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06452816374 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 4.19205298013 692% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305641194004 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158393690263 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795985826951 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170579917023 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889578612782 0.0443174109184 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.3589403974 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.8541721854 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.2008830022 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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