The diagram illustrates how water clock is made by ordered steps.
Overall, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with a tap and ending up with repetition for timing things. Moreover, in order to build the clock, some tools such as plastic bottle, stand and tape are required.
First of all, water drops pour from a container when the tap is opened. After that, maker closes a hole located in bottom of plastic bottle by his finger and then water is filled until the top of the bottle to flow drops through straws which is stuck with bottle at constant level.
In the next stage, when finger away from hole, water starts to fall into another plastic bottle of which neck is cut off. In addition, levels per minute have to be drawn in the bottle by pen. Finally, it is completed to measure time. If bottle in the bottom of stand fills with water, it will become empty and ready for repeating process from the beginning again.
- Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.To what extent do you agree? 73
- The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock. 78
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005. 78
- The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries What problems does this cause What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation 83
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63095238095 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10387828899 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9896232306 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179430685694 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750141017139 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720062297169 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127184466683 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652724412774 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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