In recent years, people prefer to use food which is cooked fast than conventional meals in their daily life. This change has benefits such as saving time but it has also drawbacks namely negative impact on health. Therefore, I think that disadvantages outweigh of the advantages.
In my opinion, the most essential thing of life is health. However, most people choose conventional food due to the easy usage, which brings dangerous results in wellbeing and leads to obesity. Because this type of foods has harmful chemical ingredients to keep for long time, consumers are likely to deteriorate their digestion process and furthermore chance of illness related to internal organs has increased. For example, a recent study found that 75% of people who eat fast foods in USA have more possibility to get cancer of stomach. Thus, convenience foods contribute badly for physical condition.
Another drawback of convenient foods is cost which is higher than homemade. Even though this kind of meals spends less time, it requires pretty much money. Approximately an amount of money which can buy food during a week is spent on just two or three days’ convenience foods. For instance, frozen soup or prepared pizza is around 15- 20 thousand tugrugs but it is only dinner of one evening. In contrast, such money is affordable to buy food of three days. Hence, it has negative effect on finance.
In conclusion, despite that convenient foods allow people to save time and chance to not think about what food will be cooked or what ingredients should be collected, it has more disadvantages for health and economy of individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08178438662 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72381899089 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6729188905 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191725361335 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621379382695 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453665694115 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119286670231 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254811646476 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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