You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request to get a new identity card which I have lost couple of days back.
First up all, couple of days back, we went to museum from our university that time I was in hurry to catch my bus to go to my house and I forget to take my ID card. I realised once I reach home and I have lost it in order to this I am unable to come to college Campos with out Identity card but I can get a letter from my Head of Department and I need to show it to Security people every time. I feel more painful to get a letter from Head of the department as he is always busy with the consecutive meetings. Another problem is that I unable to enter in to computer lab without swipe my ID card, my computer lab examination for next week in that case I need to practice a lot.
I therefore request you to please provide a new Identity card so that I can manage my computer examination as well as I can avoid some timings to wait to get a approval letter from Head of operation.
I am looking for your kind reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Hen
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| 2018-10-20 | Chandrasekhar Reddy | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st couple of days back. First up all, couple of days back, we went to museum f...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...s I am unable to come to college Campos with out Identity card but I can get a letter fr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 672, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ext week in that case I need to practice a lot. I therefore request you to ple...
^^
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...I can avoid some timings to wait to get a approval letter from Head of operation....
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, therefore, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03301886792 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33506765209 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6454189089 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179991001641 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933463388213 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527413602656 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122516337941 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317613352208 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.39 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.