You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letteradvise them of your situationexplain how this is affecting yourequest a new cardYou do NOT need to wri

Dear Mr. Peter

I am writing to let you know about the problems I have been facing since a week due to the loss of my identity card.

Let me explain my problem in detail. I am pursuing my final year engineering in computer science department. Last week I have lost my identification card while I am returning to my home from college. Firstly, since it is a digitized card, without which students are not allowed inside the campus. Secondly, I am unable to borrow the books from the library as it is a mandatory procedure to swipe the digital identity card which will generate a reference number for the books we borrow. And lastly, I cannot use the college bus without ID card as we have to show it when boarding.

Therefore, I request you to reissue me a new identity card at the earliest as the lost of my card is causing me a problem. Would it be possible to give a temporary card till I receive the original. Please let me know.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,
Chandrasekhar

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, therefore, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55737704918 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75703503767 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6027397671 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194073452521 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790145112286 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736925478708 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142737941453 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713061915737 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.