The nations integrity and development is determined by the quality of people, but not the quantity of people. In current era, the progressive increasing of global population has become a greatest problem encounter by the mankind. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and also provide my opinion.
There are several reasons why rising in population is a problem. Primarily, there is a lack of knowledge on birth control to the people living in rural areas. For example, in Rajasthan, a village in India, every individual family had at least 5 children as they considered children's were the wealth over three decades ago. Secondly, early days many men in India had multiple wife's as there was no law introduced during that period. As a consequence of that, there was little unexpected growth in the population.
Admittedly, the risks involved in increasing population, the government in many countries and other national organisations has come forward to take measures on the problem. However, few countries have already taken some precautionary measures to halt the growth of population. For an instance, in India, the government has started a campaign educating the mediocre and low income people about the problems they would face of having more than one child. On the other side, the government has also encouraged and supported the idea of adaption for those who can afford for a second child which would cut down the growth of the population to some extent.
To conclude this, I strongly agree that the increasing population is the greatest problem ever facing by the humanity. Although, the government is taking measures to slow down the the rate, however, it is the responsibility of every individual to think about the consequences which the world encounters in future of having more than 2 children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
The nations integrity and development is determined...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...reasing of global population has become a greatest problem encounter by the manki...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ernment is taking measures to slow down the the rate, however, it is the responsibility...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ernment is taking measures to slow down the the rate, however, it is the responsibility...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...future of having more than 2 children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13712374582 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85251147864 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3263205019 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184983056435 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694804492318 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915329347377 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117891971247 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529255677023 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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