Dear Tim,
How are you doing? It's been a long time we met. I still remember every moment we spent together and especially the journey from Hyderabad to Goa in my new car for the new year carnival in the year 2014 December. I even remember how you used to admire my car and always wanted to own a similar car. Finally, I decided to sell my car as I am moving to Australia soon!
I hope you are aware of the model of the car. It is Ford Endeavor 2013 made. Let me describe some positive points in it. It is a future packed car with all safety measures like Airbags, ABS and rear camera parking. It is a manually operated car with cruise control and loaded with advanced music system. All the windows are power windows and it is a non accidental vehicle maintained a showroom track for servicing. However, there are some problems associated with my car like, the wheels have reached the saturation point and need to change. Another problem is the rear seats are visibly damaged and need to replace it. Apart from that there are no major issues with the car. Just to mention, I really took good care of my car. Therefore, I decided to sell it to someone who can take care of it nicely.
I would suggest you to pay a visit sometime next month and also you can test drive the car to check the condition of the car by yourself.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours friend,
Shekar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, so, still, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42358078603 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24720756482 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4883949197 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294414374977 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855311715448 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830032446213 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138790232598 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033667840234 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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