You want to sell your car. A friend of yours might want to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
.explain why you are selling the car.
.describe the car.
say why it is a good idea for your friend to buy it.
Hi John,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health. Its been long I was thinking to write you.
I have pen down to know that whether you are still looking to buy a car, which you were talking about last time we met. As I am getting relocated to London for new project next month, that is in May. I am selling all my household items as well as car.
As you are well aware about my car, its Toyota Camry black colour of year 2016. Its a sedan with automatic transmission. It has ABS and its accident free car. It has power windows and auto-lock features. Last month, I installed new music system, its bizarre. I have replaced all the tyres. Its average is superb.
So as you can see, its just good as new. I felt really sad with the thought of selling the car. Primarily, it is a new car and secondly, it was my first car. Therefore, I wanted to sell to someone whom I know and can take good care of it. Suddenly, I remember that you have shown enthusiasm in buying the car. It will be great idea if you could buy this model as it is equivalent to brand new.
Looking forward for your response.
Best Wishes,
Sandra.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...Toyota Camry black colour of year 2016. Its a sedan with automatic transmission. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24423963134 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23053851963 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.13402061856 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7815054191 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.05 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.85 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342566500499 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880578826588 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589956980761 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180666723527 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511173519184 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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