Some people believe that in order to give opportunities for new generation, companies should encourage employees who are older than 55yrs to retire compulsory. Do you agree or disagree.
The current generation of population is concerned with new job placement as the older generation still holds higher management positions. In my opinion, the younger generation must be given opportunity at top level management. Below I shall outline the reasons why newcomers should be given a chance to prove themselves.
Firstly, due to new innovation in technology, older generations life span have increased dramatically which is leading to over population on planet earth. This leads to scarcity of job opportunity and the younger generation are finding it difficult to find a job opportunity in-spite of respectable education. All this sums up-to older generation still holding onto the higher management and the country will face higher unemployment rate risk as new graduates does not get an opportunity.for example, engineers from different sub-streams are surplus in India, but they lack job opportunity to prove their capability. i recommend the retirement age of senior generation to be re-evaluated and reduced and this will bring a whole to opportunity to younger generation as well as the nation.
Secondly, elderly personal in management segment does not appreciate younger generation in top management level of a company because they believe everything should be done by the books, however younger generation prefer to take risk and try new methods to capture the market in modern world. For instance, older generations prefer marketing through traditional method like newspaper and billboards while younger generation have spread their wings to social media like Facebook, Instagram etc... and this has open opportunities to a new level. I suggest such new generation ideas should be welcomed wholeheartedly for brighter future and economy of our country.
To conclude, I strongly believe younger generation should be given opportunities in management level of any company to study and apply new strategies of management.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...to prove themselves. Firstly, due to new innovation in technology, older generations life s...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
... to new innovation in technology, older generations life span have increased dramatically w...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... opportunity to prove their capability. i recommend the retirement age of senior ...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... opportunity to prove their capability. i recommend the retirement age of senior ...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and apply new strategies of management.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54362416107 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11550390437 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.903465563 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13864048316 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656926120287 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315894796494 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104386755468 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282682813237 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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