Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
One of the most important milestone of recent decades is the advent of internet and satellites. By these devices people will get aware of everything that is happening around the world such as speeches, wars, matches. Some people may hold the view that knowing about all these events is not necessary.However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that knowing these news even if they are unlikely that they will affect our daily life is imperative and will have some advantages for personal and social life. I personally contend that the former beliefs is better.In the following paragraphs I will elaborate on my idea through three noticeable reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that social life are rely on connections and relatives by people and every body that can not find a good friend will be alone and as a result can not have a happy life. Indeed a key factor to have persons that your attitude be the same is the ability of speaking and having a lot of topic for that. Furthermore, by searching in the internet and watching news channel to know about political, sports that are doing on the world people can get closer to each other and get larger their friends. for example, my father buys a lot of newspaper every day and follow the news and his knowledge is very much about every thing and when he sees a new person he can be familiar with him very soon and he know many people and have powerful connections that are very useful for him because he can talk them when he is upset or they can help him in the troubles.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that these events will help us to take a right decision and get lower our mistakes for predicting the future. and give us the clue of the effects that these events will have on our country or our city. for instance, when Mr.Trump the president of U.S. have an speeches it is essential to listen him because he has the ability of doing every thing in the world and destroyed our country economic and attribute to his works we should know when and where investigate and spend our money to have lower disadvantages. By and large, knowing about other world's news is avoidable and without them we can not be successful in our life and be relax.
in conclusion, searching and looking for news to be aware of what in happening in the world is important and they help us to continue on a right lines and get our goals sooner and have a happy and enjoyable life with a big group of friend that like them and like us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49347826087 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42936022757 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460869565217 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1710834405 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3846153846 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240511949136 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849918883749 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562512082643 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154153701092 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745340601679 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 58.1214874552 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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