In the modern world, due to the advancement of technology. Todays, we are always spent time on the road Rather than railways station. I am positive side of it and I fully agree this statement. I will discuss my upcoming paragraph.
In sophisticated era, nowadays all people are hectic module in their life. Therefore, they are alots of time spent in their job places and they are very diligent in their work. Hence, we are very punctual person in our life. For instance, there are touch competition one to another person not all elders and they can be teenager involve this competition. They should do all task complete.
On the other hand. Some people think that government can be investment to the roads and railway stations. We are very beneficial to all the generation like toddlers, pupils, elders and olders. While, government should do more roads available and railway stations. In my veiw, there are many pollution decline like air pollution, Water pollution,noise pollution and land pollution so on. Last but not the least, we are very benefit outweigh the drawbacks because the downsides and there are not traffic jam. It is not crowed on the roads and it is very benefits to the civilazination.
To put it in a putshall, I pen down saying that fact the government can be investments roads and railways. Finally, it should be reduce the pollution and it is very good affect to the human being life.
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- Nowadays young people knows less about their tradition and culture than in the past .what are ther reason of it? What can be done to improve this situation? 56
- Some people cliam that not enough of the water from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 56
- Scientist have been warning for many years that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy.However,most people do not change that ways of thing .what is causing the behaviour?how can people be encourged to change. 39
- The chart gives the information on the ages of the population of yemen and italy in 2000 and projection for 2050. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... station. I am positive side of it and I fully agree this statement. I will discu...
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...overnment can be investment to the roads and railway stations. We are very benefi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pollution seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much pollution', 'a good deal of pollution'.
Suggestion: much pollution; a good deal of pollution
...railway stations. In my veiw, there are many pollution decline like air pollution, Water pollu...
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Suggestion: , noise
...line like air pollution, Water pollution,noise pollution and land pollution so on. Las...
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...the roads and it is very benefits to the civilazination. To put it in a putsha...
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...oads and railways. Finally, it should be reduce the pollution and it is very good...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduced'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8353909465 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73889259108 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8058436015 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2777777778 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120663636961 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399896822678 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632128522647 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733602978861 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332247773494 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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