It is argued by some that taxes have to be high because it allows government to supply sufficiently public services for people. In my opinion, this way is appropriate but administration should set limits.
The most essential sectors such as education and health depend on taxation. If government decide to require high tax, condition of living will improve and environment will be more comfortable and safety. For example, in Australia and Singapore, they are more affordable to take services namely hospital check-ups and tuition of educational institutions than other countries which have lower tax. Therefore, development of infrastructure connects directly to the amount of payment which organizations and individuals give for their states.
However, I think that government should be flexible to apply tax and reflect limits for companies and people. Because workers give tax from their income which is also spent on other things. If there are extremely big taxation to pay, difficulties such as lack of food budget will be faced by people and then they will lost their motivation to work continuously. For instance, Japanese people have a lot of stress due to that even though they need to take care of family, their payment for country is high. As a result, this problem might be one of reasons to suicide. Therefore, tax should be organized by relying on how much money person earn.
In conclusion, it is obvious that high rates of tax lead to better services. Nevertheless, government needs to find suitable amount for each individuals and institutions, which is fair and has no risk.
- The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005. 78
- The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eflect limits for companies and people. Because workers give tax from their income whic...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...l be faced by people and then they will lost their motivation to work continuously. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17307692308 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9163358505 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.846965579 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244463197485 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800774423871 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745567676795 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161518384957 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582524040006 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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