Since the dawn of civilizattion, helping people who in need played significant roled in our lives. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine its constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Due to its paramount importance, huge steps have been taken to elevate its role. From my vantage point, I concur with the former qroup and the lines below sill shed on my viewpoint. Some people hold the view that human should each other since we need eachothers in daily life. Some other may take different point and think that is not true and persons are naturally selfish and thnik their interest. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and consider that everybody should hold the hand of helpless people. In the following paraghraps, I will elaborate on my view point based on three main reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that crime rates which increased significantly compared the last decades. With globalisation, the number of homeless people has skyrocketed compared to last century. That is, wealthy does not share equally in our modern times. Homeless people who left their job and house due to economic condition might became a gang member. A vivid example which can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own example. I used to work in a factory which was in suburb in Germany. There were many homeless who live in the street. We heard that there was a crime every month there.
Secondly, another reaons which deserve some words to say is that giving some money to a begger who is hungry feels in peace and motivated. We should help beggers because it show that our mercy. Furthermore, everybody may have hard days which economically weaken. Take my own example, I used to beg while I was in europe tour 5 years ago. People help me and I bought my train ticket. Those days is a good memories which tells me good people are much more than bad ones.
Lastly, althouh the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance. They are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. The noteworthy refreshinly intelligible statics, revealed by a recent social research conducted by a team of scientist who work at Harvard University, shows that a significant percent of participated people think that helping beggers make them happy anf feel in peace. Morever, It show helping homeless favour of our health such as reducing stress and easing blood sugar.
To wrap up, from the forager community until to day, indiviuals naturally need each others. there are no poor people in the world. Homeless people have right to live in a comfort as much as us. We should not left the lonelly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77230046948 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50434280827 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.495857982 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6071428571 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175837104583 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399360282478 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382056855969 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902930937688 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363500453641 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.