TPO-07 - Integrated Writing Task In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recyclin

The reading asserts the reason why ecocertificed to wood company is not giving significant impact for American customers. On the other hand, the lecture contradicts each one point presented in the reading.

To begin with, the reading mentions that American customers do not pay attention to the ecocertification label. They do not have much trust in advertising claims in general. However, the lecture argues that the customers somewhat distinguish if the wood product have some ecocertification especially if it labeled from an independet international organization.

Next, although it is true that people tend to choose cheaper price, it will happens if the product have huge price gap. If it is only slight difference such as 5 %, people will choose a product which has good certification rather than common products. Also, American customers like to have a product that conserve more environment.

Last, the professor refutes that American companies will not have benefits for global selling. He says that there are huge competition among foreign company to became the best. Also, he explains that if the American company do not have some innovation like getting ecocertification, it is only about the time that American customer will buy wood products from foreign company

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...e tend to choose cheaper price, it will happens if the product have huge price gap. If ...
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Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l buy wood products from foreign company
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in general, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 7.30242825607 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 201.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39800995025 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0290274598 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6554144586 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6363636364 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449222839727 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16000568845 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831644479717 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248486677747 0.162205337803 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605453263524 0.0443174109184 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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