The bar chart provides data about the favorite leisure activities of children in Australia. Information is classified by gender and referred to kids in the age between five and fourteen years.
Overall, it is clear from the chart that watching TV or videos is not only the most preferred activity by both girls and boys but also the one with the highest percentage, whereas skateboarding or rollerblading and art and craft were the least preferred by girls and boys respectively.
As concerned to male kids, 100 percent of them like to watch TV or videos in their free times, almost 20 percent more than the figure of bike riding and electronic or computer games. Furthermore, not so many boys want to skateboard or rollerblade as well as make art and craft since the percentages of these activities are between 40 and 30 percent.
On the contrary, art and craft are liked by females with just below 60% of them doing this kind of activity during free time, while skateboarding and rollerblading are ever less preferred than boys (only nearly the 20% of girls). Similarly to art and craft, around 60 percent of girls like to ride bike and play electronic or computer games. However, the most favorite type of leisure activity among female kids is watching TV or videos with a figure of 100% like boys.
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- The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. 84
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...than boys only nearly the 20% of girls. Similarly to art and craft, around 60 percent of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, kind of, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80088495575 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68030950624 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.713102067 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159891576724 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768244188314 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752700393372 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108679678507 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710290074256 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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