The line graph illustrates the global population's changes in the time span between 1800 and 2100. Furthermore, information is also elaborated in a pie chart, which provides data about urban population both in developed and developing regions in the world.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that the number of inhabitants of the entire planet had grown from the past until the present so that in 2040 the global population is expected to reach a huge maximum. Evidently, looking at the bar chart such increase is due to growth in population of developing regions rather than developed ones which show to be constant from 2015 to 2040.
In 1800, the world was populated by 1000,000,000 of people, a figure which rose one hundred and fifty years later at nearly 2500,000,0000 with a moderate trend. From this year, population has considerably grown and climbed at almost 7.5 billion in 2015. Furthermore, the steep trend is expected to continued in the following 25 years and this is due the evident increase in the amount of inhabitants in developing regions. In fact, it can be seen from the chart that in 2015 just above 2 billion of people populated developing regions and this figure is forecast to be pretty much the double in 2040 when the whole world population will reach the maximum of 8000,0000,0000 inhabitants. On the contrary, developed regions are not expected to contribute significantly to this growth since they are forecast to be steady at approximately 1200 million of people.
Once got the maximum by 2040, the world population is forecast to decrease so that in 2100 just above 6 billion of people will populate the planet.
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 78
- The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 84
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence? 84
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83271725472 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2667267051 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191570245698 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834617739449 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509574861964 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133751770255 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524136267914 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.