Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while other think people should be free to choose.Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while other think people should be free to choose.

Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays extreme sports have become commonplace in many countries. People tried to explorer and gauge their true performance by participating in extreme sports. It is thought by some that these risky sports should be abandoned as sometimes it causes dire consequences while other believe that it should be a choice of an individual as everyone has implicit right to live their life as they wish.

On the one hand, there are myriad risks for contestant as well as spectators by playing or watching these life-threatening sports. Such as; formula one race, wrestling and many more. In fact, there are several dreadful incidents where contender either got killed or brutally injured and as a result they imposed to live miserable life and it also cause enormous destruction in their families. A typical example for this is formula one car racing. It has been seen in many fatal accidents that not only driver lost their life but also viewers were got brutally injured.

On the other hand, people believe, and I agree with them that it should be decision of an individual as barring these sports is not a solution. Youngsters have desire for thrill, hence they love to push their limits by participating in extreme sports. In other words, teenagers love challenges and they try to gauge their core skills and strength by playing these dangerous games. They believe that it helps to improve decision making in extreme condition as one wrong decision may have awful consequences.

In conclusion, while playing extreme sports has lot of drawback, youngsters still love to participant as the feel real courage and zeal of competition. I firmly believe that it ought to be an individual choice. Also, by adoption of proper safety measures and regulations, the adverse impact of dire accidents can be minimized.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...osed to live miserable life and it also cause enormous destruction in their families....
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decisioned'?
Suggestion: decisioned
...and I agree with them that it should be decision of an individual as barring these sport...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05685618729 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74252793814 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3244148097 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16359248469 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529160310056 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763980536766 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112564649791 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827390797934 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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