Television has many useful functions to play in everyone's life, for some its relaxation, for some it is
companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
Television is the medium of entertainment which is the best invention of 20th century. People are entertained and enjoyed while watching Television. These days, there is an ongoing debate on impact of such electronic devices on a person’s life. In this essay, I will discuss my point of view with relevant examples and ideas.
Nowadays, after hectic work day, people need to relax their minds. Most of the people took TV as source of enjoyment by watching drama serials daily with their family. For instance, according to a market survey done in early 21st century, the Television was sold drastically high in amount. Hence, saying that each home has Television nowadays would not be wrong.
Similarly, watching television throughout the day can be distressful and severely affect the health of a person. Moreover, social interaction of people would be also be compromised. For example, a study done by the University of Health Science revealed that people who watched television for 10 hours a day had eyesight issues. Therefore, people should watch the television in a balanced way.
In a nutshell, watching television play a vital role in people's life. The essay discussed some of the Television impact on our daily life and its deleterious and harmful effects on human health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17619047619 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8170238875 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8307876736 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6428571429 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184316316369 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601740050605 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586720828692 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12175203813 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599835481524 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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