As technology is developing more and more people are getting hooked on to internet to purchase goods. Do the benefits of online shopping outweigh the demerits.
Gone are the days, nowadays all dwellers are departs on the technology. While, technologies are specially is very common in their countries. I think, my point of veiw, shopping play a vital role in human being life. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my opinoin in upcoming paragraph.
In sophisticated era, shopping is backbone in their life. Hence, any people like the shopping. But, they have hectic schedule in their life. They should time spending in their work places. Therefore, they could not time spend himself and family member. Furthermore, they have umpteen pressure on the work. For instance, they have touch competition in all professions like teacher line, docter, business, engineer and fashion design etc. Then, dwellers are give the best performance in the offices and the boss will be happy. They give the bonus to the employees. Then, employment fullfill needs provide to the family members.
Nevertheless, today technology is very fast. All people use the any application like online shopping, whatapps, twiter, snap chat and facebook so on. In my mind, i think, online shopping is very beneficial to all person. Otherwise, they are shopping online in any places and they could not time killing in their life.we can easily buy all the things. For instance, today all people are follow the celebrities. They always time follow the celebrities clothes and they are special are avialable in online shopping. Last but not the least, in my point of view, they do not go the shopping places and save the time. Hence, we do not face the traffic problem.
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, in my opinion, i think, online shopping is beneficial all age group. They could not bargaining in the online shopping. They have fixed prices all the material, clothes, shoes, make up kit and watch so on.
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...icial to all person. Otherwise, they are shopping online in any places and they c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02605863192 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57901066981 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1333731783 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.3461538462 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8076923077 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.34615384615 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973119387315 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304879520982 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298901090008 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063419449295 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412757758284 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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