Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
Being a resident in the foreign land is a tough job in terms of language and culture. I disregard the logic behind that it can cause serious social problem as well as practical problem in resident life. It totally depends upon the parents and the society you choose to live.
Today’s world is a global village where you have to travel from one country to another to make money, better education and so on. The society and language might be the same of your nation so you have to adjust it accordingly. Having said that, it doesn’t mean you need to quit your language/ culture and switch to other one. You can carry on both at once during you reside there. For example, a family living in a foreign land teaches their child a mother tongue instead of foreign language and the same will apply in the culture too.
People get influenced by the surroundings rapidly. One can get the blow of the local language and culture instantly. We can see plenty of people who are now change by living in the different society then they previously belong. Either it is language, dress they wear or the culture they now celebrate. For an example, popular Nepal actor Ms Rich Sharma is now crushing her motherland in her recent talk show about the culture, language and the mentality of Nepalese people which she used to belong previously. Now the time had changes and so her mind and opinion about Nepalese culture and Nepalese people.
To conclude, it is up to one what to opt and not instead of blaming the foreign language and culture. So I can’t agree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...We can see plenty of people who are now change by living in the different society then...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66071428571 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45718178956 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0170981878 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324581283352 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937442980742 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825967711461 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193935377278 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119392458137 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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