Some people argue that it is a good for children to study in a boarding school, while others suggest children live with the family.What is your opinion?

One of the most conspicuous trends of sending children to boarding school is that it augments their self-reliance. Not only boarding school students have to do their daily chores by themselves such as washing clothes and keeping their rooms tidy, but they're also required to adjust to a completely new surrounding and mix with people from myriad backgrounds.

Apparently, thus gives from on an opportunity to learn a large array of attributes such as discipline cooperation and teamwork skills are necessary to shake their character and personality. Needless to say, all these merits as mentioned above will stand youngsters in good stead, when it comes to successfully coping with the challenges of the outside world after they finish school.

Notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits, boarding schools are not without concerns. The primary one stems from the fact that they have a number of stringent rules and regulations in place, many of which are arduous and cumbersome for an adolescent to follow. It hardly needs mention that not everyone possesses the same level of resilience and adaptability. Besides, an unwelcome distance between parents and children can also result from living away from home for a long period. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of day schools instead.

In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some concerns, the role of boarding school in making children independent social being as well as preparing them for future challenges is instrumental indeed.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...othes and keeping their rooms tidy, but theyre also required to adjust to a completely...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, hence, so, thus, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30204081633 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91674280458 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7005862618 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.9 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202746271312 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721915001317 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520406704106 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11543131686 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381781916898 0.0609392437508 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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