There have always been a great focus on how the young people are behaving in a community because it will depicts the whole features that a society will have in the future as this generation turns into adults. Although it really differs from one country to another, I think that the rules that a young person should follow to get accepted by the society as a promised civilian are very strict. I will explain below the variety of sources that creates these limitation which are assigned for youths to obey.
The first source of rules conducted in each society are the laws established by governments. We never had the more complexity in a governmental system as we have today in the whole history. Everyday there will be a new inventation adding to our life that needs some new laws to prevents it from being harmful for the society. For example there have never been a law for youth to strict them from listening any sort of music. But nowadays there are some soundtracks that are restricted for underage people becuase it contains vulgar speech or inappropriate languages.
The second one is the rules that are made by religious sources. Now the societies are becoming more and more secular every day but the priests believe that people should still act in a way that make the God be content of us. As the previous generation are more religious than their children they will try to restrict them by some moral rules such as the way they talk about the religion and God or the way they behave toward holy scripts.
The last source of rules casting over juveniles is the media. Movies and TV shows are highly affecting the young people to live in a special style. Things like fashion will restrict youths from living in anyway they like. For instance if you don't dress like the mainstream fashion showed in media sources the other people will not accept you as a member of their social groups.
To summerize I should mention that though the people today are more free to choose their own living style and activities compared to the past, but there are still great limits for the children and adolescents to follow either made by government, religion or media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'depict'
Suggestion: depict
...behaving in a community because it will depicts the whole features that a society will ...
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Line 1, column 451, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this limitation' or 'these limitations'?
Suggestion: this limitation; these limitations
...low the variety of sources that creates these limitation which are assigned for youths to obey. ...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... as we have today in the whole history. Everyday there will be a new inventation adding ...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a special style" with adverb for "special"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ghly affecting the young people to live in a special style. Things like fashion will restrict yout...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...ashion will restrict youths from living in anyway they like. For instance if you dont dre...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n anyway they like. For instance if you dont dress like the mainstream fashion showe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, really, second, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69816272966 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36219014285 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522309711286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9134254189 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200875605016 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064135374358 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046362116602 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108008953985 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537731984718 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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