The chart shows the number of viewers per day of Channel One news in 2015

Essay topics:

The chart shows the number of viewers per day of Channel One news in 2015

The line graph compares the quantity of viewers per day between January and December of Channel One news in the year 2015. Overall, the data displayed different patterns, including a reduction of the 6pm and 9pm news' number of viewers, a growth of the 11pm and a stability of the 1pm over the period.

In January, the 6pm news was the highest of the figure for viewers, followed by the 9:30pm and 1pm news. From January to August, there was an 11pm news that was introduced on 1st May then it reached a peak of four million viewers in August, considerably surpassing the 1pm news', the 6pm news' and the 9:30pm news' number of viewers in the same period. In contrast, the 6pm and 9:30pm news witnessed a significant decline from around five and three million viewers to under four and two million viewers respectively, while the 1pm news was unchanged.

Between August and December, the number of viewers of the 11pm news experienced a huge drop to under one million viewers in December. On the other hand, the 9:30pm news rose remarkably to three million viewers. Meanwhile, the 6pm news went up to four million viewers in September, then reduce slightly to around three million viewers. The 1pm news was level off over the time period.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2024-12-10 Trần Ánh Vy 67 view
2024-11-19 hahoaan 78 view
2024-11-12 Huyenlbg87 84 view
2024-11-10 Giang Tran 84 view
2024-11-10 Giang Tran 84 view
Essays by user vdnguyen3012 :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...news. From January to August, there was an 11pm news that was introduced on 1st Ma...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, then, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71889400922 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48039307483 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5499782798 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308323956215 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148767856363 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107580391811 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241773828842 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699220174082 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.