Some people think is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
In the modern world, parenthood has become a discussed topic. Some people believes that raise a child in the city is better, although others believes that the rural areas is more appropriate. In the essay below I will further explain this topic.
Some people believe that grow up in the city is better. There are some advantages in raise a child in the city. First, in the city families has access to modern hospitals, medical specialist, high level of schools, entertainment, huge librarians, modern playgrounds, many options of daycare. Second, in the city, due the accessibility of all those facilities cited above, people feel safer to raise their children, because they know that all needs can be easily met. In contrast, some studies shows that living in the city triggers some issues like long hours of commute or some psychological disorders such as, stress and anxiety.
On the other hand, there are some people nowadays that, when they have their kids, they change their minds and move to countryside. There are some pros in living in the countryside. For instance, families spend more time together once they do not have long hours of commute. In addition people are able to plant their own food without conservatives, preservatives or any others kind of toxins that is harmful for our healthy. Moreover, in the countryside the whole family need to work together for long hours and this make the time they spend together increase also they develop a skill to work as a team. Contrarily, people in the countryside has less accessibility to some services like modern hospitals or high level schools.
This essay discussed about the advantages and disadvantages of raising a child in the city and in the rural areas. To conclude, despite living in the city has many conveniences, living in the countryside promotes some benefits that you would not be able to obtain in the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...y do not have long hours of commute. In addition people are able to plant their own food...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...out conservatives, preservatives or any others kind of toxins that is harmful for our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96855345912 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70463652637 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512578616352 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9015918316 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218339478704 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799393025727 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660589915187 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126971959509 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262161872437 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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