Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people.
How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is competitiveness a positive or negative qualities?
As we live in the world of competition, being competitive account a great feature in peoples' mind. I believe, while, it has different effects on people with this quality, some of them could make problem.
Competitiveness could influence different aspect of peoples' lives who are competitor. They have some specific innate quality which help them to look everything different of others who do not have such an attribute. For example, difficulties in everyday life or problem at the work. As they always want to be best one everywhere so try to cope with all issue which place in front of them. Due to this feature, they usually need to be confirmed by other people. Moreover, repetitive and unexciting jobs usually make them bored why they always feel like involving in any kind of competition.
As it is mentioned above, being competitive has its own positive and negative effect. These people tend to be perfectionist in any situation. Although, it could be considered as good attitude to improve themselves, small success may not make them satisfied so they usually do not have internal satisfaction especially if do not achieve to what they want. It may cause to lose their confidence. Furthermore, boring jobs could be harmful for them because it leads them to depression. While, some of competitor deal with these conditions by adding some creative activity to change their positions.
In conclusion, the competitive quality usually inclines people to achieve great levels in various situations like sports, business, arts to name a few. It must be considered that it could make individuals vulnerable to some problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...lem at the work. As they always want to be best one everywhere so try to cope with all ...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'losing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: losing
...achieve to what they want. It may cause to lose their confidence. Furthermore, boring j...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...em because it leads them to depression. While, some of competitor deal with these con...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndividuals vulnerable to some problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90931783249 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1137055755 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188773306131 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661075442313 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798739725556 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126825068001 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440427164965 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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