In many countries school have severe problem with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solution can you suggest?
The youth behavior in schools is a main issue in societies. Not only do their activity affect schools but also the society is influenced. The several solutions exist to tackle such a problem.
Parents have a great effect on their children manner because they spend most of time together. Some parents, especially new parents, spoil them rotten by providing everything and never say no to them even in contrast by unattainable demands. So, children think they have the right to behave with others like their parents and reveal rebellious manners in schools. Furthermore, in some schools, children determine how to administrate the rules cause their managers want to achieve some financial objectives especially in private schools. It could lead to unacceptable behavior of youth. Moreover, some new violence films and animations incline them to show some strange conducts among their peers.
Investigating the roots of these manners could help to react in better way. Some violent behavior either among family members or friends make bullying children. If it is, manager should ask their parents to some change in their home or friends. In addition, some reforms in parents' actions could be effective especially when the youth make mistake in schools. They do not defend their children against any fault that they make. Adults must react decisively to teach them how the breaking rules could end. Above of all, some official law in outer world of schools should be applied like banning the possession of guns. Some youth make trouble for their classmates, teachers and schools by attacking them with guns.
In conclusions, it is true that various reasons for behavior problem of children in schools, some steps need to be taken to deal with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17132867133 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55238289026 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2290962788 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107285849585 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424001870981 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432357679323 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959689422189 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540655679528 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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