The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
A reportage about usage of energy in the USA from information in 2008, is summarize in the given bar chart, which consist of energy consumption in 1980, and also predicts in 2030.
Overall, petrol and oil had the maximum share of energy consumption by 35 quadrillion units, moreover, three energy careers nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower by less than 5 quadrillion units was the latest popular energy source in 1980.
However applying of petrol and oil, experienced the decline firstly, after 1995, it increases gradually and also it is expected to reach more than 45 quadrillion units until 2030. Coal and natural gas consumption was close to each other by 16 and 20 respectively and in 1985 to 1990, 1998, 2006 and 2013 had the same quadrillion units in usage, nevertheless, it is anticipated, that coal will take over the natural gas in 2030 by more than 5 quadrillion units.
Nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower had the same consumption sate until 1990, after that, nuclear consumption increase slightly, and its usage will arrive to 7 quadrillion units, likewise, solar/wind had the same tend and will experience the just more than 5 quadrillion units in 2030, but hydropower fluctuated until 2010 and it is forecasted that it will have the constant consumption by 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'summarized'.
Suggestion: summarized
...in the USA from information in 2008, is summarize in the given bar chart, which consist o...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... latest popular energy source in 1980. However applying of petrol and oil, experienced...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09478672986 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88622868648 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7681640757 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.0 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.2 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 5.23603664747 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1589510667 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10856597048 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103083541826 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129142650234 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105760767461 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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