It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
There are different opinions about children due to their talent. Some people say every person is built for specific major and other believe every person could be expert in what he/she want if he/she make effort appropriately. For proving every attitude, different studies has been investigated, nevertheless, I think both prospective are correct.
It is demonstrated that every person who is born has a specific characteristics like talent. People who are talented in certain major off course could be success more, provided that, their identities is identified well and also are located in situation who could rear their abilities. Although all people for becoming success need to attempt as well, talented men will pass this route easier, because of their mental and physical capability. Take as in illustration, Messi, a football player who have been able to be successful and gain different international prides in football. Although Messi also have tried all this years, rarely have anybody omitted his talent.
Conversely, never should we forget, everything may be done. In other world we must mention that although talent has effect on becoming expert vastly, there have been many people who could cope the difficulties and go through route of successfulness. In other word everybody is able to overcome everything, provided that make effort adequately. In fact no body don’t allow to say “ I have not able, unless he/she have not tried well. For instance Ronaldo who is also a football player have been able to become successful like Messi. Maybe the talent of Ronaldo has been not as much as Messi, but there are no body who have not praised Ronaldo because of his unquantified effort.
On the whole we could infer everybody with particular feature are able to obtain successful as long as making effort. In fact although talented people could be successful easier, other people will be able to become by trying more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...y person could be expert in what he/she want if he/she make effort appropriately. Fo...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...be expert in what he/she want if he/she make effort appropriately. For proving every...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
...every person who is born has a specific characteristics like talent. People who are talented in...
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Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...all. Although Messi also have tried all this years, rarely have anybody omitted his ...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., provided that make effort adequately. In fact no body don't allow to say &a...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...ed that make effort adequately. In fact no body don't allow to say ' I have n...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: saying
...ately. In fact no body don't allow to say ' I have not able, unless he/she h...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...y ' I have not able, unless he/she have not tried well. For instance Ronaldo wh...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...een not as much as Messi, but there are no body who have not praised Ronaldo because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14556962025 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71856625219 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522151898734 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9019199398 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153001685974 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539867173957 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448492227755 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104863802307 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02058271883 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.