The table below provide information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.
The table describe the weekly rents property (E/W) and salary needed (e/year) in three different area of London, Notting hill, regent’s park and Fulham. In addition data has been illustrated for three distinct bedroom.
Totally with increasing the bedroom expenditure has been rised. The maximum amount of weekly rent is calculated in Notingham hill for three bedroom (738 E/w), in addition one bed in FUlham by 215 E/w has the latest rents among all. On the whole weekly rents for notingham hill is more expensive and for fulham is less expensive than regent’s park.
In other hand salary needed depend on weekly rents and according to number of bedroom has been grown. Three bedroom in nitingham hill by 194000 salary needed is the most expensive and one bedroom in fulham by 56500 salary needed is the cheapest.
At reason regents park with the middle accommodation expense may be the most suitable place for tenanting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'describes'.
Suggestion: describes
The table describe the weekly rents property E/W and salar...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...hill, regent's park and Fulham. In addition data has been illustrated for three dis...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bedroom' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bedrooms'.
Suggestion: bedrooms
...has been illustrated for three distinct bedroom. Totally with increasing the bedroom ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in addition, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05194805195 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52776786703 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7631094845 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121544960626 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615316809432 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748150625996 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877728177964 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888924335152 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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