It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
There are 2 polarized opinions in modern society about the sport and musical talents. While some people agree that excellent athletes and musicians are born with innate talents and others or not, some are of the belief that all children could become successful in sport and music fields through training. this essay will discuss both views and jump to the conclusion.
To begin with, it is obvious that some individuals with inborn talents have more advantages than others. In fact, kids with natural strong health conditions, stamina, flexibility have more potentials to become great runners in the future. Nguyen thi Thao – a gold – medal earning runner of Vietnam is a stark example, when she was 8, she already had an exceptionally giant body with long legs comparing to other friends. Moreover, in music sector, many people owning beautiful voices have easier access to become successful artists in the future.
however, from my perspective, all kids can have chances to become professional athletes and musicians via rigorous training, dedication and hard work. Thank to serve training processes and a healthy diet, children totally can improve their physical health to adapt the criteria for sports. For instance, Leo Messi – a football legendary is famous for his small body with just 1.68 meters long, however, by enormous efforts in the youth, he now has capacity to beat up many strong teams. In music field, a reality has shown that not only people possessing beautiful voices could succeed in this industry. Lana Del Rey is a well - known USA singer, although she doesn’t have any strong technic in singing with mediocre voice, she still conquers millions of fans by creating her own genre of music.
In conclusion, I totally believe that all the kids still could have a bright future in sport and music industries if they try hard enough even when they don’t own any special skills
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06501547988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49567527169 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643962848297 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.831431824 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.846153846 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243602248173 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079491777616 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583001052868 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144902737073 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636717157122 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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