Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A University has a considerable impact on the students lives. It is the highest institution where one can learn about many subjects. Some people believe that all university students should be required to take history courses regardless their background of study while others disagree. In my view, there is no need to take history courses for all university students for two important reasons.
First is that addition of history courses will put enormous pressure on many students. The students whose background are unrelated to arts or social study, taking an additional course will be a burden. For example, when I was in University, I have seen one of my friend who was from commerce background. So, he needs to focus on economics, business management, finance, and business-related subjects. And studying those courses one student have to do huge works. Every course requires giving the test as well as assignment and practical work. So, there was a huge load of work. My friend also did all the works required for his study. As a result, he had not enough time to take others courses. But his department insists to take a history course in order to be a graduate. So, ultimately he took the history course. And because of that, he suffered a colossal pressure on his normal study. Therefore he did not do well this particular course even he got bad marks on his majors also. As you can see, how history course put pressure on the students whose majors are unrelated to history.
Second, it is unnecessary and a waste of time and money for many of the students. The students who are from science background do not need to take history courses. For instance, I studied biotechnology at a university. Biotechnology is a specialized branch of biology. And when I studied it I faced with many scientific experiments like DNA isolation, southern booting, gene cloning. These are highly sophisticated science where I do not need to earn knowledge from history or any other field. If I put my time on taking such a course as a history, then it just takes my time. I cannot able to put my concentration on my majors. If we put time on such an unrelated subject, we cannot be able to give ample amount of time for our research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'course'?
Suggestion: course
...s or social study, taking an additional courses will be burden. For example, when I was...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... business related subjects. And studying those courses one student have to do hug...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'giving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: giving
...to do huge works. Every course requires to give test as well as assignment and practica...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... take others courses. But his department insist to take a history course in order...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...history course in order to be a graduate . So, ultimately he took the history cour...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ered a colossal pressure on his normal. Therefore he did not do well this particular cour...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rse even he got bad marks on his majors also. As you can see, how history course put...
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Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...lation, southern booting, gene cloning. These is highly sophisticated science where I...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'subject'?
Suggestion: subject
...rs. If we put time on such an unrelated subjects, we cannot be able to give ample amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77748691099 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75592136389 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8194696185 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5925925926 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1481481481 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242288129929 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674366578806 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702426546729 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188526898941 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768647806434 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.