What are the causes of water shortages? Please also offer some solutions to this problem.
Give some reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Undoubtedly, water scarcity is becoming a worldwide problem, which puts human life in danger. In my opinion, there are several reasons for this issue, and various measures could be taken by governments and individuals to improve the situation.
There is a variety of reasons why lack of fresh water resource to meet water demand. Initially, the pressure of the growing population on water resources is also responsible for water shortages. Overpopulation brings about a considerably request for water in three sectors namely agriculture, industry and households. As the matter of fact, irrigated farming practices expanded in recent decades consume an immense amount of water and waste much of that through inefficiencies. Secondly, climate change such as altered weather-patterns including droughts and floods is another contributor to water scarcity. It has undesirable influences on people’s lives.
Fortunately, there are several actions that an individual or society could take to solve aforementioned problem. First, governments should spread awareness through media such as television and radio about the significance of water in our lives and encourage citizens to preserve this precious resource. Besides, farmers should take advantages of cutting-edge technology such as hybrid seeds to improve the output of crops and also use recycled water for irrigation. Moreover, rainwater should be stored and used for farming and domestic use to mitigate the water waste, fight climate change and safeguard our future.
In conclusion, water shortage is a global problem that is caused mainly by the growth of population and climate change, which requires governments and citizens to be cooperated to solve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('request') instead of another adjective.
... shortages. Overpopulation brings about a considerably request for water in three sectors namely agric...
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Line 6, column 538, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...tored and used for farming and domestic use to mitigate the water waste, fight clim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67307692308 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07802624455 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0144944153 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16916373545 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601699436673 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340409958391 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106339626872 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163511431234 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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