Which kind of traveling do you prefer - TRaveling in your country or to another country?
Generallly speaking, traveling is one of the most desiredle kinds of pastime for humanity. While some people prefer to take advantage of travelling in their own country and deepening in the very roots of their nation, others like to have far tours to foreign countries. I am more for doing foreign tours. This is because they get an opportunity to meet interesting people all around the world and become familier with different civilisations. Below, i would like to elaborate on my view in more details.
To begin with, as I have mentioned, of course, local travelings have distinct privaladgies such as gettig more informed about my own country and culture. I myself learned a lot not only about culturel possession of my nation, but also the precise geographical locations of the latter's thaks to my local journeys. Hence, traveling in one’s own country is benefictial in terms of getting closer to national values.
Yet, on the other hand, it is the travelings to foreign countries that give an opportunity to make friends from different nations. Judging from my friend's experience, I can state that communication with a variety of people leave unprecsedented momries for the rest of the life and can inspire for new interesting activities. From this perspective, far travelings have even more advantages as they are richer with new meetings and memories.
Moreover, foreign tours give a chance to investigate diversity of cultures which is another valuable experience in one's life. In fact, the more cultures people know, the broader their horizon is. Again, I can exemplify this statement on the experiences exaples of my fried who travels a lot and is used to living in different continents every seison. as a matter of fact, it is a peasure to communicat with him as he is such an open minded person.
All in all, I would like to restate, that althoug local travalings have distinct advantages, traveling far fron brders is more benefitial. I think so because it is a valuable experience on one's life from different perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in fact, of course, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04705882353 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93858120793 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6080741432 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.941176471 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212920578565 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666615258988 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666843165946 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112817245071 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445551062571 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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