The given diagram gives information about how electricity is produced by water. It is a complex process consists of different steps, which we can discuss below.
Firstly water from the sea got evaporated due exposure to heat from the sun. This particles forms clouds and scattered by the wind. At a stage the cloud will melt and cause rain, eventually the rain water got trapped in reservoir of dams. Water from the reservoir is passed through ducts to the generators, the flow can be adjusted using valves. By the means of water power the generators work and resulted in electricity production.
Water from the generator passed to pumps, then return to the reservoir and this cycle continued. On the other hand the power produced is transfered to substations, from there further distributed by underground cables. Finally from the cables domestic, hospitals as well as factories receive electricity.
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...ent steps, which we can discuss below. Firstly water from the sea got evaporate...
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...nd resulted in electricity production. Water from the generator passed to pumps...
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...from the generator passed to pumps, then return to the reservoir and this cycle c...
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...ed. On the other hand the power produced is transfered to substations, from there...
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...ther distributed by underground cables. Finally from the cables domestic, hospitals as...
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...ables. Finally from the cables domestic, hospitals as well as factories receive e...
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...well as factories receive electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15646258503 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76891640389 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.0377382174 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14707228549 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568690880759 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493548390379 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110616793277 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602513585981 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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