Despite improvemwnts in vehicle technology there are still large numbers of road accidents.some of the causes of these accidents,and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
In the sophisticated era, today technology is very fast. All people use the public and private transport vechicle in daily basic in their life. Travelling play a vital play in human being life. There are plethore reason behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Modern world of world information of knowledge. Nowadays dwellers have a hectic schedule in their life. They should umpteen time spent in the work place. Hence, all age groups use the vehicle in their life. Afterthat, they have comman thing use the transport system.There are alot of transports.For instance, cars, active,bus,truck, bicycle and motorcycle so on.Then, there are cause many types of pollution like air ,water, soil, land and noise pollution.
To trigger with, adolescent have a vehicle technology in their life because it is attend the school and evening time visit coach centre and gym etc.For example, they have personal vechile to the teenager.otherwise, they should be use all time vechicle in any work.They have do not care about riding on the road and they should be talking with freinds.But also,they could be not wearing helmet on the road.Last but not the least, they do not care about drive on the road.Then,there are umpteen road accident in any month because it toddlers could not be focus on the road.
To summarise,after analysing that issue reckon,all age group use the private an public transport system in their life. There are causes of accident rise on day rountine life because it underground of chidren are not allow the used to vechicle.But also they have used it.They could be not focus vehicle on the road.They always time talk with freind and high speed on the driven.As well as,they have very detrimental for the pupil life.I think that,toddlers should go their school in the walking. They always fit and health.Then,the road incient could be decline day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05095541401 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85863817996 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 152.716824782 49.4020404114 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101965519977 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293651923386 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373062846871 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645568858971 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379412797191 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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