The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions of telephone) calls in the Uk,divide into three categories from 1995-2002
The horizontal chart reveals that information of representation the total of minutes in billion of communication calls in the UK.There are three types of call from 1995-2002.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration,mobliles all call was very declined in 1995 to 2000.Then,there was upsurge in 2002 mobiles call more than two fifths. after all, in 2000 to2002 was similar ratio for national and international fixed line in three fifth minutes billion. Moreover,in 1998 was very down fall national and fixed call international more than a third minutes billion.
On the flip side, local fixed call was rose proportion in the chart.But also,dweller was mostly used the local call. Last, in 1998 to 1999 was boomedlocal call in 90 minutes billion.
To sum up, local call was highest used for the adolescent and the reduced mobiles all call in the chart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...2002 mobiles call more than two fifths. after all, in 2000 to2002 was similar ratio f...
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...1999 was boomedlocal call in 90 minutes billion. To sum up, local call was highest u...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...nutes billion. To sum up, local call was highest used for the adolescent and the reduced...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, third, well, after all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1134751773 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12832690972 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5638289271 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272254785117 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152830916347 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116304576647 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205174103802 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133731309921 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.