Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In order to have a bright future for children, profession etiquette has to be taught to them. Many people opine that teachers should teach them to distinguish right and wrong so that they can behave well while others believe that the duty of trainers is only teaching subjects.
There are two chief reasons why it would be better for children to learn academic subjects in schools instead of judging what is right or wrong. The main reason could be inadequate time which pupils have in schools compared to their houses, so the time should be considered to teaching their lessons than moral behaviors. This helps students to get great grades and attract the attention of prospective admission officers or employers. Another reason also would be a heavy burden put on teachers; therefore, the responsibility of teaching acceptable and non-acceptable behaviors should be done by parents
However, the majority of people deem that the duty should be done by instructors. That is because in some nations, developing countries in particular illiteracy rate among parents is very high, so if they and teachers cannot teach their children how to behave correctly, where can children learn them; as a result, they will definitely have serious disciplinary problems in the next future. Furthermore, the role of teachers in modifying children’ behaviors as a role model is more important than parents because of their academic science and invaluable experience about pupils’ manners.
To sum up, I personally believe that child’ mentality is like a clay which is better be formed by their teachers as a potter.
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...e formed by their teachers as a potter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in particular, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23754789272 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86737008231 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4454819763 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.888888889 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354078782755 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133031308917 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112618171592 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202690678711 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108718981218 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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