Technology causes more problems for modern society than it solves.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether the technology is the cause of problems in our modern society or itself solving it. Indisputably, the advancement of technology has perished our physical and mental abilities by its various inventions. Nevertheless, with proper care of using these inventions can definitely avoid these problems in our lives. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that technology is causing problems to us and would argue that it is making our life easier by solving many critical and cumbersome problems.
First of all, technology is the mother of inventions and inventions often solve difficult problems with ease. I would like to point out that once a mathematical calculation which was very arduous to us, can be solved within a second, with the help of calculator. Several prototypes are been modeled with the help of software simulation, which was unthinkable at a certain point of time. All of these happened due to the advancement of technology. To illustrate this, let us look at an example of mailing system. Once we have to wait for days for a letter to come; with the help of an email anybody can communicate with anyone within a fraction of seconds, breaking the barrier of delaying due to distance. In these circumstances, it is obvious technology is solving many problems in our modern society.
Furthermore, the contribution of technology in solving many problems in healthcare is undeniable. Specifically, with inventions of different diagnostic machines we can detect many diseases in its inchoate stages. Following which, effective treatment of the patient has become ubiquitous. Both common sense and personal experiences has shown us that the decreasing mortality rate due to wrong treatment is decreasing day by day. Hence, all the above evidences are showing the benefits of technologies in modern society.
Admittedly, any kind of addiction to technology can certainly damage our natural skills. This is true especially when it comes to overuse of calculators for simple problem solving, over depending on the mobile gadgets to solve any kind of issues. In addition, taking help from internet in each and every aspect of life. However, the argument does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that technology causes more problems than solves it. Because the effect of technology is far more beneficial than detrimental .
In conclusion, although there are some baneful effects of the technological advancement, the deleterious effects have been superseded by its omnipresent advantages in our daily lives. As long as some measurement are performed, or some areas are involved technology will continue to serve us with altruism. In fact, it is one of the best tool to serve the humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24660633484 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03480717238 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552036199095 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7204188166 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276651112177 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776568896024 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893641285705 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14938432715 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843433277158 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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