The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by aidarqua on Tue, 11/06/2018 - 08:18

The pie charts illustrate the causes of choosing bicycle or car for journeys to work.

It is clear that the main reasons for choosing a bicycle are health and fitness that provide riding on a bicycle and less pollution that bicycles produce. Furthermore, these reasons are both equal 60% and they take the same proportion in 30%. The last three causes of choosing a bicycle are approximately equal and take from 12% for faster journey comparing with driving to 15% for no parking problems.

The major reason for driving to work is the comfort of a journey that cars provide and it takes 40% that more than the second cause in almost two times. The next main reason is a huge distance to work and it takes 21%. The last three reasons are almost the same in importance and take from 11% for safety that bicycle cannot provide to 14% for being able to carry stuff to work and for higher speed.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n the second cause in almost two times. The next main reason is a huge distance to ...
^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...huge distance to work and it takes 21%. The last three reasons are almost the same ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54938271605 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24223668733 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0679722083 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156861047988 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954446444411 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529843542232 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133078522774 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266275062403 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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