The bar chart shows the scores of teams A B and C over 4 different seasons Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over 4 different seasons.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart compares team A, B and by scores in 4 different seasons from 2002 to 2005.

Overall, the scores of 3 teams fluctuated over 4 seasons and team B remained on the first place in all seasons.

In 2002, the scores of team B was the highest in 3 teams and in 4 seasons of 82 points, this number was far higher than team C and team A with 10 points and 5 points, respectively. The gaps between team B and team A and team C was contracted in 2003 with 60 points for team B, 15 points and 11 points for team C and A.

2004 witnessed a significant increase in scores of team A to a peak of 35 points, which impressively shorten the interval between team A and team B to about 8 points. With the points of 43 points, team B was the champion and came in the third place was team C with 12 points.

In 2005, the scores of team A sharply fell to 8 points which led to second place, team B steadily kept the highest points of 55 points and the last was team C with the lowest scores in 4 year of 5 points.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, in the third place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97073170732 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.342804494 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424390243902 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.0 1.45097560976 69% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.500452077 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1611512572 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114065356343 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496443537541 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132860846585 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459090133641 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.8 61.2550243902 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.34 11.4140731707 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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