The pie charts give information about the farming products in two various areas of the country. The percentage of 4 products varied in 2 regions.

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The pie charts give information about the farming products in two various areas of the country. The percentage of 4 products varied in 2 regions.

In eastern region, farmer produce nearly similar percentage of 4 products. meat accounted for 35% of the production. dairy placed second with 30% and vegetables rank third with 20%. The lowest proportion belonged to grain with 15% of total production.
There was a big difference between the agricultural production in Western region. In contrast with eastern one, grain made up the largest percentage with 45% in the West. There was also 35% of meat produced in this area while dairy ratio was only 15%. The proportion of vegetables was the lowest of only 5%.
In general, meat and grain were 2 main agricultural products in both area whilst vegetables and dairy production were almost the same or lower.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meat
...early similar percentage of 4 products. meat accounted for 35% of the production. da...
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dairy
...at accounted for 35% of the production. dairy placed second with 30% and vegetables r...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ltural production in Western region. In contrast with eastern one, grain made up the lar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, third, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 590.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68369907691 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9228435752 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5555555556 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1111111111 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104997101721 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401879384981 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501503819035 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829700681962 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550951912202 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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