task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

It is evident that government companies take a good initiative in scientific research programs.The outcomes of the research is mainly used for the public welfare not for the personal profits. This research is carried out by private company is not a good option. I strongly agree with the statement because government have certain rights to assess it very well.

To begin with, public companies have adequate fund to undertake any scientific research for the welfare of society. They have range of authorities or rights to control it at a certain level and an effective review mechanisation. Secondly, government companies always have aim to begin it for the purpose of nation development. They have nation-serving aim by conducting it. Such as, in the sector of medical, government company holds the research program while introducing any new drug or medicine. While doing research government companies are observed under the surveillance of government guidelines.

On the one hand , it is observed that if private companies lead the scientific research program they might think about the society motive. This will lead to monopoly in the research field. Movingfurther, the less financial assistance do not allow to operate scientific research for private companies.

To conclusion, due to significant motive for the society and more financial sources with umpteen rights move to government companies in scientific research.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...tiative in scientific research programs.The outcomes of the research is mainly used...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e introducing any new drug or medicine. While doing research government companies are...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vernment guidelines. On the one hand , it is observed that if private companie...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'operating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: operating
... less financial assistance do not allow to operate scientific research for private compani...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rights'' or 'right's'?
Suggestion: rights'; right's
...and more financial sources with umpteen rights move to government companies in scienti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48416289593 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03249184956 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547511312217 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7428176203 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2307692308 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239529364698 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964963947911 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642816862352 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157082166403 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465129368297 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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