The development of the technology has become more advanced over the recent years. Technological products take essential parts in all aspect of life of human. While some people believe it would divide the society into two groups, finally. However, I partially agree with it on account of couple of reasons, which will be further described in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, it is indispensable to communicate with each other in the modern society. As the rapid evolution of the technology, it is beneficial for human to broaden the personal relationship by using the various type of social software. Nevertheless, few seniors tend to contact mutually by the conventional way.
To demonstrate, the majority of people communicate with their friends by sending e-mails and employing social apps such as Facebook and Line. However, due to its complexity and incomprehensive, several elderly tend to contact by traditional mailing and writing letters. This not only renders the seniors to become more isolated and remote from the society nowadays, but enlarges the gap between the younger and older generation.
Last but not least, in addition to the reason above, acquiring the latest and useful information is fundamental for every individual. Taking advantage of these sophisticated products with multiple functions makes the daily life of human even more accessible. Specifically, with the mass improvement of the intellectual products, receiving the latest information and current affairs by cellphones and the internet is prevalent. Nonetheless, the elderly prefer to gain the knowledge from books and television. Though the older generation updated themselves by utilizing the traditional ways, it is advantageous, nonetheless. The means of getting information could be either modern or obstinate way.
Although the advancement of the technology could have a positive effect on the present life in terms of its convenience, it could lead to negative scenario as well.
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- universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54426229508 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12065015725 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2249333148 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187312331248 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480785998717 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332107736687 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913241899284 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386814513408 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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