Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowdoubt, schools are play vital role in every person's life. Only schools are make advance and intelligent world. An array of people believe that children should not be given homework everyday but others believe that they must get homework every for successful in school. Both views shall be discussed in the upcoming context and opinion in the last.
To begin with, homework is not be given to children everyday. First and foremost, students feel bored in homework in daily routine and some students are not able to do homework.Morover,nowdays study is very hard and it makes children lazy and students feel lazy and tired in everydays homework. Secondly, a important health is helps to make brave society and which makes healthy world. Health is also important for children because without healthy body and brain study is not impossible for anyone. As a result student children should not be given homework everyday.
On the other side, children must get homework everyday for their better result .Firstly, in schools children learn about all over the world's past and present. Without education student's life like a fish without water. Homework is sent good information to children for mind sharpning .Moreover, homework helps to learn again that work which complete in school by children, it is increase student's brain power. Secondly, school homework is helps to student's success in school. Children complete their homework everyday for achieve their life goals and high status in school. So, everyday homework for children is beneficial for us.
To sum up, according to my opinion children should homework everyday because it is good for their school life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21189591078 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65309815315 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498141263941 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.812721893 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446472248721 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176882253613 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158608210769 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306090122555 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111845751688 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.