Writing Task 1Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:– Explain what caused the damage.– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?– What needs to be done to fix it?

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Writing Task 1
Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:
– Explain what caused the damage.
– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
– What needs to be done to fix it?

Dear Mary,

Last week’s inclement weather wrecked a huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Halifax. However, the damage to my house was much more severe and it needs to be urgently fixed. (Communicate the overall message and need for urgency.)

Strong blizzard winds (Strong snow storm) from the North dealt a heavy blow to the city’s infrastructure in general and to this house in particular. The storm somehow ruptured the outer walls and destroyed a portion of the house’s heating system. Consequently, the drawing room’s and bathroom’s heating systems are not working. Moreover, a few wide cracks have appeared in the house’s roof.

Since it is icy cold outside and cracks in the structure are dangerous, I believe you need to urgently fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contractor, and get the repair estimate prepared quickly. I am sure the property is insured against damage caused by weather. The insurance company will release the funds immediately.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Sartaj.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge damage'.
Suggestion: huge damage
...t week's inclement weather wrecked a huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Hal...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'systems'' or 'system's'?
Suggestion: systems'; system's
...y fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contracto...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, in general, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46820809249 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96366673653 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0792846708 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7692307692 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110036059367 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379015049099 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474790223757 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704685529715 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545090444924 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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